Creepy crawlies riddled the building’s interior, and I hadn’t even used my powers to bring them here.
Nice. That establishes quite nicely that we’re back to Taylor’s perspective. 🙂
One thing I suppose I haven’t really commented on before: Whenever we leave Taylor’s perspective, the story goes into third person, whereas Taylor’s narration is in first person. I like that – it makes for a consistency when it comes to who appears to be telling this story, even if it’s questionable that Taylor would end up knowing all the things we learn from other people’s narration, after the story’s end. Take Brutus’ Interlude in particular – he was a dog, and he’s dead, so there’s no mundane way for Taylor to get that story from him.
It seems like we’ve got an omniscient narrator who’s telling us about events and the setting from the POV of various characters, and limiting her narration to how she and the other characters were perceiving things back then.
(Not that I’m saying Taylor will literally become omniscient by the end of the story.)
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