End of Interlude 11a

That was a good time. A very interesting chapter with… way more talk of My Little Pony on my part than one might’ve expected regarding a chapter about Rachel and Siberian. 😛

In order, this chapter gave us:

  • Seemingly happy Rachel
  • Seemingly happy Rachel questioning why she’s less happy than the other Undersiders
  • A look at Rachel’s feelings about Taylor and the events of Parasite
  • A look into Rachel’s backstory and why family isn’t among her top values (fuck Rachel’s third foster mom)
  • Bitch dealing with a civilian thinking he could get off with shooting at Angelica (what’s gonna happen to that guy anyway? is he dead? or is he just going to be lying there until someone dares go get him and take him to a hospital and/or Panacea?)
  • A short but entertaining fight between Brandish & Glory Girl and Bitch
  • Cut short by our first meeting with a Slaughterhouse Nine member
  • Siberian, who is great, freaky, and freakily great (and I love the angle of Rachel finding someone she can relate to in a Slaughterhouse member)
  • Rachel choosing to fail her challenge of loyalty and go see what the Slaughterhouse’s test is all about
  • wolf pupy

So basically, lots of really good stuff.

Next up… maybe more Rachel? If she’s going to the Slaughterhouse’s test, then she might act as our POV to get to know the rest of the members as well, allowing us to have a Slaughterhouse Nine Interlude half-Arc without actually looking through the eyes of the members we’re examining.

Then again, maybe Wildbow has done pretty much all he wanted to do from Rachel’s perspective for now and we’ll have another POV next time. I do feel like we’ll still be checking out Fellowship members, though, so it’s just a matter of who we’ll be following and whose perspective we’ll see them from.

I guess I should throw a wild guess out there… maybe we’ll find out about Hatchet Face next?

So yeah! This was fun. See you next time!

Was it easier with him?  What did that mean?

Well… for so long we’ve known you as “the dog girl” because your power works on dogs.

Now it seems it’s more natural for you to be “the wolf girl”.

This is an interesting note to end the chapter on, especially after:

She couldn’t articulate the thought, but it was Taylor’s face that flashed into her mind’s eye when she put the phone away.

But it’s not a bad one. It’s just different and a bit more… metaphorical.

The man looked up at her, staring for long seconds.  Finally, he nodded.  She didn’t know if he would, or if he’d be able to hide it, but if he did inform Coil, it would at least be an excuse to get rid of him and the others.

…fair enough.

Also worth noting: It’s possible for the guy to inform Coil without knowing it himself. Without it actually happening.

She looked down at the wolf pup, who was still struggling to bite at her fingers.  She let it go, waited until it tried to attack her again, and pushed it down onto its side once more.

D’aw.

“Little bastard,” she smiled.

D’aww.

Almost without thinking about it, she used her power.  Just the smallest amount.  She felt almost none of the vibrations or shudder she experienced as a visceral feedback on her power with the other dogs.  It was only when she saw his skin splitting that she realized it was actually working.

Uh. You sure you wanna do this? This puppy isn’t exactly trained, by the looks of it.

Also, the difference between dogs and wolves in the feedback… is the power actually designed to work primarily on wolves, and just works on dogs because they’re the same species but domesticated? And the domestication and/or genetic differences from breeding causes feedback?

Faster, quicker, with so little of the temporary exhaustion she so often experienced on her end.

Huh. Yeah, it really does sound like this is what her power is really effective on.

The Dandelions probably can’t tell the difference between a wolf and a dog.

The rule was to call Coil at a time like this.  To let him know what had happened.

Of course. But will you follow the rules?

At this point, I have a feeling she won’t.

She found her phone in one of her jacket pockets and she fumbled with the keypad to find him in her contacts.  Her finger hovered over the button.

But it comes down to this moment.

What was she holding on to?  Who was she protecting?  Her friends?  Were they really her friends?  It wasn’t that she wanted to betray them, she wasn’t about to repeat that mistake, but…

But is this really a betrayal in the same way?

She couldn’t articulate the thought, but it was Taylor’s face that flashed into her mind’s eye when she put the phone away.

Oof.

Wait, that wasn’t the end of chapter line either?

So because of Taylor… Rachel has decided at least to give Siberian’s offer some time.

I’m down for this storyline. 🙂

Maybe she would see what this test was about.  She wasn’t about to back down.  But in the end, she‘d make the call about where she went and what she did.

Yeah… maybe.

Though I guess Siberian would support her on that, no matter how much she personally wants Rachel to join.

“You,” she told the man with the gouges in his face, “Go to a doctor.  Take anyone here that needs it.  But I don’t want you telling Coil, I don’t want you using his doctors.  Got it?’

Not being very subtle about your decision to actively keep secrets from Coil, huh? Better hope you can trust these people to be more loyal to you than to Coil.

I’m not sure you can.

There was a card in the bottom of the box, stained with urine.

Good job.

Bitch picked it up with the very tip of her finger and thumb.  She’d never properly learned how to read, so she had to work out the individual sounds, moving her lips to try to piece it together.

Ah, yeah… I remember the name spellings from 8.8.

“Ah… air yoh… you.  Air you a…”  That letter, she didn’t recognize it.

Are you a…

After it was… “oll… wolf.”

Hah, called that. Are you a dog, or are you a wolf?

She gave up.  She could guess, anyways. 

Are you a wolf, or are you a dog?

Oh, hehe, I wasn’t expecting the rest of the sentence to be there. 😛

A furry bundle tried to escape, and she stopped it.  It bit for her fingers.

!

A puppy? Perhaps some sort of monster puppy?

She pulled her hand back, gripped it by the throat and forced it down to the ground, making her dominance clear.

Fortunately, Rachel knows how to handle creatures like this.

I think.

A husky puppy?  No.  The physical makeup was wrong.  The smaller ears, longer limbs, and markings around the jowls and muzzle.

Is this a Siberian tiger kitten? :3

A wolf pup. Where had Siberian found this?

Ah. Niice.

(Also I guess a tiger kitten wouldn’t have a muzzle. Silly me.)

This was recent.  Siberian had done this in the time it took Bitch to get here.

Damn, she’s quick.

That much was to be expected given her tiger theme, really, but still.

More blood, one of the boys, a dog groomer with years of experience, lying beside the kitchen counter, his shirt wadded up and pressed to his face.

At least she seems to have left everyone alive, though injured.

Around the shirt, she could see the four parallel tracks where Siberian’s fingernails had left gouges running across his face.

Ouch.

None of the dogs were hurt.  She had to double-check them to see.  Most were cowering in the corners.  Some had retreated up the stairs.

Yeah, no surprise there. Siberian seemed to genuinely like the dogs, and with this being framed as a present, it wouldn’t make as much sense for her to hurt the ones even she can tell Bitch actually cares about.

The blood had a pattern to it, as though Siberian had painted a picture with the spray.  A line drawing from each of the injured to the center of the room, where a box sat, faintly dusted with flecks of blood.

…oh, huh.

She was nervous as she opened it, but she couldn’t not.

AND THAT’S WHERE I’LL END TONIGHT’S– no, I’m kidding

Let’s see what we have here.

Shaken, she gestured for Bentley to come to her, and climbed up onto his shoulders.

Well. At least she gave you time to think about it.

Let’s see what the other gift is, at the den, I guess.

Coughing, snorting water from her nostrils, she gave the order, “Home.”

Looks like Rachel has the same priorities.

Her thoughts were chaotic as she rode Bentley down the streets, a dull roar of too many things all at once, all too important to be ignored.

There’s a lot about Rachel that’s chaotic, but probably not quite in the same sense. 😛

At the same time, she didn’t want to think about them, didn’t want to put those pieces together, because she wasn’t sure she liked where they would lead.

Betrayal. Leaving the Undersiders. Breaking her loyalty to the team.

Joining a team with a crazy kindred spirit.

The gift Siberian left her.  Some of her henchmen were at her den.  More important, some of her dogs were there.  Every minute the trip took left her more worried.

It’s entirely possible the henchmen are all dead.

Siberian probably left the dogs alone if she did do something like that in a way that allowed for her to.

She hopped off Bentley as they arrived at the building, shoving the doors open.

At least the building’s still standing. That’s a good sign.

Blood.  Trails leading to Barker and Biter, who were on the ground floor, unconscious, still breathing.

Yeeeah, she totally did try to give Rachel the gift of freedom by cutting her Coil-provided shackles.

One of the girls, the one with veterinary training that Coil had sent to her, was sitting in one corner, nursing an arm that dangled at the wrong angle from the elbow, sobbing.

That’s, uh, not supposed to be like that.

Bitch frowned.  Words that sounded nice, but that was all they were.  Just words.

And we’re back to that phrase.

So you don’t believe her? Freedom, oh, freedom, well that’s just some people talkin’?

(Your priiison is walkin’ through, this world all alone.)

“I’m going to give you two presents, Bitch,” Siberian whispered.  “One will be waiting for you when you go back to your… what do you call it?”

Her base?

It’s not gone, is it, as a misguided gift of freedom?

Bitch didn’t answer.

“Let’s call it your den.  I like that.”

I mean, that works.

Siberian closed the distance to Bitch with a surprising speed, her steps less controlled, carrying her long distances forward as she zig-zagged over the flooded street.  Before Bitch could react, or before the dogs could step in, she was next to Bitch, stopping.

Hi.

Siberian put a hand on her collarbone.  Bitch was lifted into the air and pushed down into the water, soaked, landing hard enough that the air was forced out of her lungs.

Oof.

Sounds like Siberian is strong too.

Hm… I wonder if the rigidity is in part due to being far heavier than she should be, to match the mass of a tiger? That and a tiger’s grip.

As she struggled to breathe, Siberian whispered, “The second gift is special, a treasure for a kindred spirit.”

I’m still not sure this isn’t going to be a kiss.

Bitch coughed, struggled, but she couldn’t move the hand.

“As of this moment, you’re the only one to hear me speak and live afterwards.”

Huh, neat. That would explain why she’s on record as not speaking.

Wait. Is the doggo shooter still alive and conscious, or did Siberian’s eye-poking kill him somehow? Because if so, then he’s currently among those who have heard her.

She kissed Bitch on the forehead, like a mother would with a child.

I knew it.

I knew there’d be a kiss at some point. Though I was picturing it as being on the mouth, to Rachel’s surprise, but this counts.

Bitch tried to twist away, and only succeeded in getting water in her eyes and nose.  She sputtered as she struggled to draw air into her empty lungs.

Careful, Siberian. Much longer now and that last thing you said could turn into a lie.

Although I guess she did say “as of this moment”, like it could change in the future. But trying to recruit a kindred spirit and then murdering them for no reason makes no sense.

Is this perhaps a preliminary test? To see if Rachel can get out of this herself?

When she could see again, Siberian was gone.  Her dogs were looking up at a nearby rooftop.

Oh, okay.

See ya!

Bitch looked around the empty, flooded streets as Siberian was doing.  She didn’t answer.

Is the mention of the streets being empty perhaps supposed to be a metaphor for Rachel’s life in the territory being empty in a different way?

Maybe I’m overthinking, though.

“Maybe you can be happy like this.  A dog, collar around your neck, a fenced in territory.  You’ll never really understand what they’re all talking about.  The best you can hope for is a pat on the head when you’re good, when you do as you should, maybe some companionship whenever you’re a good girl.

Do you want to be a dog, or a wolf?

But maybe that’s what you want.” 

To be fair, in Brutus’ Interlude, the dogs seemed quite genuinely pleased with being good boys and good girl.

That probably doesn’t quite apply to Rachel, though.

“As opposed to what?”

“Being wild.  Being free.  Truly free.  It’s exhilarating,” Siberian breathed.

“Drop those human morals and laws. Do what you want with no care for others. Take the step from chaotic neutral to more-chaotic evil.”