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What’s this? I was thinking “She just had to get away.” would be the final line. Are we getting a few paragraphs from Bonesaw’s perspective, perhaps?
Amy cursed the curfew as she saw the figure in the air above her.
Oh, I see, just skipping ahead a little.
Would this flying figure be Flashbang, having just noticed the note, or maybe Brandish or Glory Girl either in that position or returning from the Bitch encounter.
Either way, the curfew makes Amy easier to spot, since there aren’t a lot of other people running around.
When people weren’t allowed out on the streets after dark, it made those few who did venture out that much more visible. Not what she’d wanted, not when she was trying to avoid this exact conversation.
Yeeah.
It was even more problematic when she walked at maybe three or four miles an hour, limited to following the paths the roads and alleys allowed her, when her sister could fly at fifty miles an hour.
The troubles of the landbound.
So it’s Glory Girl up in the sky, then. Excellent. I like their dynamic and Victoria is the one Amy felt closest to and whose rejection she took the hardest.
She should have hid, instead of trying to make some distance.
Okay, yeah, that seems like a pretty silly decision. 😛
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